In English, we have been looking at creative writing. This is a quick exercise.
The man laid in the gutter, his hair and suit drenched by the constant downpour. A puddle formed around his head, comprised of both train rain and his tears. The strong wind blew his wet hair, causing goosebumps to rise along his arms and legs. The cool weather had numbed his face and body, and so the constant catapulting of sleet and hail didn’t affect him. Finally, he shut his eyes.
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