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Wednesday, April 22, 2020

Creative Writing Final Piece

Disguised by the cloak of its surrounding vegetation, a stone city lays
inside the hollow cliff face. The green of the jungle’s overgrown
leaves is tinted yellow by the evening sun’s all-seeing light.
Connected only by a series of rotting wood bridges, the village is
other-worldy. I clench the rope handrails, and make the perilous
journey across. 
The buildings look completely different up close. A door is opened, a
deafening creak bounces off the walls of the abandoned dwelling.
I let my gaze wander out one of the few windows. A waterfall, sent by
the heavens, hides the next set of bridges. 
A maze of pitch-black, furnitureless buildings, I have trouble making
my way down. 
I heave my lantern from my backpack. The match resting against my
temple finds its hot rod red edge running against the outsole of my
boot.
The lantern’s pet flame crackles, illuminating the walls and floor.
The colour of fallow, and the texture of old, battle-hardened concrete.
Small rooms, dead ends, window-less dwellings. 
A small wooden door blocks the way forward. A push and a pull, it
doesn't budge. My problem solved by a swift kick, I grumble, and
continue.
I use my bag to shelter my head, and drag my feet through the wall
of water. Wet and miserable, I heaved myself across the next rotting
wood bridge. 


I didn’t even notice the plank break under me.

1 comment:

  1. This story is really great, I love all the adjectives you have used so the reader can paint an image inside their head and truly imagine what this utopia would be like.

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