hi Greg I like how you told the reader what you were learning to do. Next time can you make your writing a little bit longer, and tell the readers what a beam is and a beat board is. This reminds me of when I was at gymnastics for a school trip, at Olympia.
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hi Greg
ReplyDeleteI like how you told the reader what you were learning to do.
Next time can you make your writing a little bit longer, and tell the readers what a beam is and a beat board is.
This reminds me of when I was at gymnastics for a school trip, at Olympia.