My class had to write a persuasive letter to somebody that will convince them to change to a healthier lifestyle. So I created this.
If text has a yellow highlight, then it is a "Persuasive Word / Phrase."
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Gregory (Last Name)
If text has a yellow highlight, then it is a "Persuasive Word / Phrase."
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Gregory (Last Name)
180 Waterloo Road
8042
Wednesday, 30th August.
Kayla (Last Name)
180 Waterloo Road
8042
Dear Kayla,
I strongly believe that the way you are currently maintaining yourself is unacceptable, and that you should change to a healthier lifestyle. This lifestyle change includes maintaining Physical, Emotional / Mental and Social well being. I believe that this new change of living will drastically increase your lifespan, and make you far more confident in yourself, and your body.
Maintaining Physical Wellbeing.
Maintaining a healthy body is very important to keeping fit. You must exercise regularly, for about an hour a day, and you must consistently harvest the vitamins and proteins in certain foods, such as meat, fruit and vegetables. This will make your body far stronger, much more healthy and will help your immune system to defend your body from bacteria. Be sure to avoid junk food, and sitting down for too long, so you don’t overload on carbohydrates and become overweight. This will make you far more confident in your body.
Maintaining Mental / Emotional Wellbeing.
Mental Wellbeing is an essential step to being happy. You have to stay confident in yourself, and try new things. You have to say: “I can do this, and if I don’t think I can, I’m going to try anyway.” This is called a “Growth Mindset.” A ‘Growth Mindset’ is a state of mind where you have to think you can do anything. Always try your best and find the positives out of everything (while avoiding the negatives), this will result in a drastic increase of happiness and confidence in yourself.
Maintaining Social Wellbeing.
It is paramount to sustain some sort of “Social Wellbeing.” It is crucial to make plenty of friends outside the house and maybe have a Penpal who you can write to. Join a book club or something similar and stay active, always attending meetings and interacting with other members of the club. This will make it far easier to talk to other people.
In conclusion, I believe that maintaining Physical Wellbeing will make you more confident in your body. I also believe that maintaining Social Wellbeing will make it easier to talk to other people. Finally, I believe that Mental Wellbeing will help you stay happy and confident in yourself. Yours Sincerely,
Gregory.
Hi Greg!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is an amazing piece of writing. I really like the strong words you have used in your writing. Maybe next time at the bottom you could say what some of the big words mean. Why I say this is because what happens if another person doesn't know what it means. This could also lead to that person using one of these words in the future. Anyways great job Greg!!!!
-Alesha